leaves are falling
yet autumn sunshine restores
paradise inside


leaves are falling
yet autumn sunshine restores
paradise inside
perambulation
u v dose with green and blue
adjusts life’s outlook
autumn insistence
deceives the deciduous
tricks them into fall
droplet of mist
distilled from fallen cloud
uplifting
joy seldom far away
plants of many varied hues
surround and delight
still leafed, mottled gum
autumn lit by subtle sky
gently beautiful
portland delivers rain
flowers still herald easter
and a wet drive home
time for an haiku
robe offers an omen of bliss
big kiss yellow flame
holly has berries
but a gum tree towers above
crowning the scene
foliage and blooms
not the least of nature’s gifts
in any season
The Adelaide Hills, wonderful no matter how you look at them.
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autumn sky above
layers removed as it warms
southern clime comfort
blackwood fire station
mercifully not needed
this cool autumn day
procrastination –
feels like evermore’s ahead;
quoth autumn, ‘Really?’
It’s the Autumn Equinox in the Southern Hemisphere
march holiday
marching on this holiday
ideally get fit
Z likes to have a purpose, not just a vacation. So this Autumn it’s going to be a marching holiday.
We’re off to the Adelaide Hills.
autumn brings soft light
a way to see good enough
during darker days
bronze coloured trees
proudly announce Melbourne’s fall
gold medal season
Meteorological Autumn starts in Australia 1st March
I started a dialogue with ChatGPT about a haiku for a picture with the morning sun streaming through a stand of gumtrees. But a system error occurred, and when we re-engaged, the following unfamiliar verse was offered instead of what we had been working on.
I’ve changed the first line (which was a bland ‘The autumn leaves fall’) to link the rustle of leaves to ‘whispering’, which opens line two. I added a title, removed unnecessary punctuation and changed any Caps to lower case. It’s quite a pleasing haiku. I don’t know who ChatGPT was doing it for, but here it is
autumn leaves rustle
whispering secrets of change
nature’s artistry
This unrelated photo of gumtrees is included for fun.
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