murray river flows
rippling broadly as a smile
whilst snagging toes
An even more sombre third line might be ‘whilst taking souls’. For example, of thousands of US and Australian airmen trained to be paratroopers, or to fly B24 Liberators etc. in WWII, there were more casualties from swimming in the Murray than from flying, firearms training or parachuting accidents. Beware of snags indeed.
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